Video one- Wood Bison Disease Testing I don’t like the fact that 57 seconds into the video the audio has nothing to do with what the viewer is seeing on the screen. I also don’t like how the footage is random footage. It is almost as if the footage is a continuous shot of what the camera guy got and most of it doesn’t have anything to do with what the narrator has to say. It’s almost as if they didn’t receive a lot of footage so whatever footage they did get they just used for the story. As a journalist I wouldn’t think this is acceptable.
Video two- Good Luck I like the transitions between the black and white and the color images. I feel that it not only gives emphasis to the pictures but it also makes the viewer pay more attention. I especially liked when Sgt. Jon Fleenor was telling the story about his bear, IUD. The color went to black and white when the bear was shown right when Fleenor said that his bear turned all black. The other thing I enjoyed about the video is that the stories were all related however, they were all different stories so as a viewer I didn’t get bored with the concept of the video. Something I didn’t like about the video was when Sgt. Cole Weih was introduced and he said, “This was given to me by my grandmother…” and the picture displayed was a picture of Sgt. Weih holding his hands to his face. I understand you want the viewer to stay intrigued but at the same time the audio should match the image you are showing. This good luck charm video is a great way to view soldiers at a time where military stories are so often done that they are becoming repetitive. This is a great video that would never get old because the lucky charms would never be the same.
Video 3 – The Boy in the Moon I really liked how the narrator, Ian was talking about eight years and the images that they showed were of Walker, his son over the past years. It was a great way to show the growth in the child. I liked how Ian was talking about joy and the picture that was displayed was of a person with that exact expression. The editing on this film is simply remarkable because a lot of the emotions that Ian is talking about are displayed. The only real problem I had with this video was that there were no captions or explanations of who was being shown. I’m pretty sure it was Ian’s wife, Walker’s mother. Also I think if there would have been audio examples of how Ian and Walker talk to each other it would have given more meaning to that part of the story.
I think my favorite video story over all was probably the second video Good Luck. I work on base and I feel very compelled to do a story like his except maybe from a child’s perspective. Have the child explain what they keep a a security blanket while their father/ mother is away.






